Feedback Strategies:

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1-The first one is helpful because I feel like this all the time during the story's. I love character development and will be looking out for that in other people's stories.

2-Pointing out things that are confusing will definitely be feedback that I will need. I always accidentally leave things out when I tell a story. I always assume the audience knows more then they do.
3-This one goes along with the previous point. This is a great thing to look out for.
4- I am not the best storyteller, but I will do my best to help people to be able to expand their stories.
5-This one is a bit more obvious. This is more about how a person writes rather than their story. Though I do think a person could be repetitive for a style choice or using it for emphasis.
6-This is important and without this post, I probably wouldn't have done it. I agree that it is important to explain why we feel the way we do, so the author can better understand our critiques.
7- Small specific details can definitely improve a story. It can help to not make it sound generic.

7 Characteristics That Support Meaningful Feedback: Article

1-Constructive
2-Specific
3-Measurable
4-Sensitive
5-Balanced
6-Applicable
7-Not Grade-Focused

These are different but similar to your suggested 7. I think them being put into basically 1 word makes it a little easier to keep in mind

The Problem With Praise: Article

All of these have in common that praise doesn't make you better. You can always improve and by relearning what is important like learning and effort children/adults are much better off.

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