Reading Notes: Epified: Mahabharata, Part B

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Title: The Mahabharata: Karmic Revolution

Author: Epified TV (India)

1. A story about a young girl who befriends an old man who is feared is charming. I also like that he has magic and is able to share the magic with the child. That is a pretty good base for a good story.

2. It is hilarious this dude not on,y shot an arrow through both the man and the woman BUT that they were doing it when that happened!! That would make an interesting rhyme. It is cool he doesn't care if it is not his kid.

3. It is hilarious that when she dropped the kid it broke a rock. ait would be funny if she used him like that all the time after the discovery. I do wish that some of the children were girls.

4. I like the 100 demonic children that is so weird and funny.

5. There were no elements that I want to use in this clip.

6. This makes me think of Hercules smashing the snakes he killed as a baby. Also, a kid and a giant snake could be an interesting story.

7. There were no elements that I want to use in this clip.

8. This is also a lot like Hercules. I like that they learn to use the elements. It is like avatar last air bender.

9. This is one of the best stories so far it would be great to turn into rhyme to show that your hard work can mean more than where you come from.

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