Reading Notes: Epified: Mahabharata videos, Part A

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Title: The Mahabharata: Karmic Revolution

Author: Epified TV (India)

2. I still love how she tells her man to never question her. That is so progressive for these stories. Then she had to go and kill her babies. That is just so weird not the kind of story I would want to tell.

3. I think it would be a fair plot point to have a woman not want to marry the king because he already had a son with a different person and knew that her child would be 2nd to him.

4. I don't like that he promised not to have happiness for his father. there is a way for everyone to be happy it seems dramatic.

5. Kidnapping 3 young girls are bad and not what I would like to include in my story.

6. I think there is potential with the girl who goes to her love and he doesn't want her. I think it would be better for her to kill him for a twist to make the story more interesting and then she takes over the kingdom. (This is such a silly reason to fight to the death)

7. I am not a fan of how people just need to have children for royal purposes and not love. I want to write a story that does it right.

8. I don't like that these poor girls are suck with this guy. Why couldn't they find someone who loved him? Why does his looks matter so much? Belle was able to love the beast and this guy is human and NICE!... The Servant GIRL!!! YAS!! I love.

9. The blind king would be a great name for a story. I would want a different story but I will be thinking about it. I hate she gives up her sight instead she could use her sight to help him...

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