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Reading Part A

Reading Part A


Meme

I wrote a story in rhyme about this story and it was very difficult because all the things in the story don't have many rhymes and it limited my storytelling a bit.

How the Turtle Saved His Own Life
I think that this could be easily adapted into a new rhyme for me to write. I would want to change them thinking he was a demon to something else but I don't know what yet. I think that there could be some great wordplay in my story.


The Merchant of Seri
I did not like this story very much I thought the goo merchant was going to bring that family more money since she had more mouths to feed. I rather write about a different story.

The Turtle Who Could n't Stop Talking
This story is very sad. I prefer writing dark or happy stories for the rhymes. I hate that he splats

The Ox Who Won the Forfeit
This was a pretty good story although I don't know what lead the farmer to treat his ox that way. If I wrote the story I would need to add his thoughts so the audience could understand that character better.

The Sandy Road
This was not a very good story. I think that it was too long and boring. I really like the moral of don't just get rid of supplies if they are still good. So, maybe I could rewrite the story to make it more interesting.

The Quarrel of the Quails
I really like the title of this story. I also like that this story is like Nemo. It is a different approach instead of swim down they fly up.

The Measure of Rice
This story was not my favorite. I think that it has some merit but would need a lot of revisions if I were to write a rhyme about it.

The Foolish, Timid Rabbit
This story is just like chicken little! Except the sky isn't falling the earth is breaking. This is a fun take on a story that most people are familiar with and it would be fun to write a story about.

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