This story had a good moral but it was not told int the best way. Maybe it being written in rhyme would help. The demons not having a shadow was a cool touch to the story.
This is not a very good story. There is modeling behavior but he simply heard people talk about hurting people. I don't want to write a rhyme over this story.
This story is dumb.. If you can talk with these creatures why did he feel comfortable killing them in the first place?? This is just too bizarre to me.
This story was ok. I think it could be enhanced if it was turned to a rhyme. I would want to change the reasoning why they went into the forest though. They are always demonizing women.
I would write a rhyme about this story but I would not have the king buy him. Then the elephant was taken from his friends and family.
This was a great story. Not really any moral but it was an interesting look at how the animals view their place.
This story needs a little work but could be a great addition to my stories!
I really want to write a rhyme about this story. It is great!! It is very clever!
Why the Owl Is Not King of the Birds
This is a silly story. I would need to add more if I were to write a rhyme about it.
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