Week 11 Story: YOU'ER A LAIR!
Once upon a time...
Brian asked his friend to care for
his plough.
He needed to leave for a journey he
could not forego.
His friend accepted with delight.
His next actions will begin a fight
The friend sold his plough with no
guilt.
He was completely breaking the
trust built.
The plough he sold for a great sum
He would do his best not to be
dumb.
To cover his but he devised a lie.
Any foul play he would quickly
deny.
He was so happy with his new
fortune.
Not considering Brain’s misfortune.
When Brian returned he had a
question.
He asked it with no hint of
aggression.
“What happened to my plough?”
“This is such a terrible woe!”
His friend lied through his teeth.
Under his frown, there was a smile
underneath.
He stated how big rat ate it up one
night.
Brian knew that something was not
right.
This lie did not fool him at all.
He thought to himself that it took a lot of gall.
He was sad that he would do such to
a friend.
Brian knew just what to do to make an
amend.
He acted as though all were well.
On the matter, he would not dwell.
The next day he took his friends
son for a walk.
All they did was talk.
Then Brian dropped him off at his
friends home.
He was not to go off and roam.
He needed to stay there until he
returned.
The boy felt no reason to be
concerned.
When Brian returned without his son.
His friend's temper was completely
undone.
He screamed for the location of his
boy.
Doing this to his friend did not
bring him joy.
His friend wanted to go to a judge.
On the matter, there was no need to
budge.
Brian accepted and they went on
their way.
His friend had a story so he did
convey.
The judge asked if it were true.
The real truth Brian would debut.
He then told the judge about the rat's feast.
This judge was not convinced by the tale in the least.
So his friend confessed to his lie.
Believe it or not, Brian saw him cry!
Brian then brought him his kid.
To do that again his friend forbid.
Now their relationship is quite changed.
Their fondness for each other was quite ranged.
Authors note:
This was not my favorite story to write. It did not flow as easily as some of the other stories I have written. It was difficult for me to convey who was doing what. I tried to fix it by giving one of them a name but I should have made one of them a girl. Overall, I am not proud of this story but at least I finished it andtried to make it better.
Hi Brittany,
ReplyDeleteYou should be proud of your story! like you said, its been the hardest one for you to write so far but you were still able to finish it and get it done that is always a win in my book. You overcame the struggle and I believe it is a really good story. It was finished fast, but it was just as entertaining as the original. Great job.