Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Week 8 Comments and Feedback:

I think that the quality of my comments has been great. They catch little things that I miss and as soon as I read them I just make the changes.

I think that I give good feedback. I may be too nice. But I really have loved a lot of the stories I read. I think my intro is pretty representative of who I am.

I think that I will continue to do what I have been with the comments.

I am very surprised by how well people are responding to my stories. It makes me feel really good. I didn't think that that many people our age still enjoy rhyming. I know I do but it is awesome how people have responded.

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